A review by Domoni.
Ari is a the White Wraith. A legendary criminal who refuses to bow under the rule of the Dragons. She is a Chimera, a Fenthri imbued with blood or organs from dragons. On Loom, the three humanoid races live together, though not in peace. When Ari finds Cvareh injured on the ground, she moves to kill the dragon and steal his heart. He promises her his boon if she will get him to the alchemists. Ari knows that it would be a risk, and though she despises all dragons, having the chance to get her wish granted convinces her to save and help him. When Ari’s charge Florence is separated from her after dragons attack their town, Ari realizes Cvareh is running from something much bigger than she realized. The dragon king has his strongest warriors searching for them and it will be a miracle if they make it to the alchemists.
This is an interesting fantasy/steampunk story. The author’s writing is excellent and she has created a deep full world full of vivid scenery and characters. The hierarchies of the different races are complex and frustrating, making the world ripe for resistance. The story had some wonderful moral underlays that hit the heart, making you connect deeper to the characters.
I enjoyed the main characters. Ari is fierce and strong and though her anger was ever present in her distaste for the dragons, you eventually learn the reasons and it makes sense. Florence was actually my favorite. I loved her strength and determination. A good book with two amazing female characters is always a plus for me. I was bothered that the first half of the book alluded to the women being in an intimate relationship and then suddenly they yanked that out from under us. I would have preferred that the author not tease us in that manner, as it quite put me off when the reality was revealed. The actual romance was one of those instalove from hate kind of relationships that I don’t care for and it damaged the story a bit in my mind.
The author created a very distinct new world that did take a little bit of work to keep track of, but it is worth diving into and will invite the reader to return to learn more about this story.
My rating: 4/5 stars.
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The Alchemists of Loom
(Loom Saga #1)
Publication date: January 10th 2017
Genres: Fantasy, Young Adult
Her vengeance. His vision.
Ari lost everything she once loved when the Five Guilds’ resistance fell to the Dragon King. Now, she uses her unparalleled gift for clockwork machinery in tandem with notoriously unscrupulous morals to contribute to a thriving underground organ market. There isn’t a place on Loom that is secure from the engineer turned thief, and her magical talents are sold to the highest bidder as long as the job defies their Dragon oppressors.
Cvareh would do anything to see his sister usurp the Dragon King and sit on the throne. His family’s house has endured the shame of being the lowest rung in the Dragons’ society for far too long. The Alchemist Guild, down on Loom, may just hold the key to putting his kin in power, if Cvareh can get to them before the Dragon King’s assassins.
When Ari stumbles upon a wounded Cvareh, she sees an opportunity to slaughter an enemy and make a profit off his corpse. But the Dragon sees an opportunity to navigate Loom with the best person to get him where he wants to go.
He offers her the one thing Ari can’t refuse: A wish of her greatest desire, if she brings him to the Alchemists of Loom.
Elise Kova has always had a profound love of fantastical worlds. Somehow, she managed to focus on the real world long enough to graduate with a Master’s in Business Administration before crawling back under her favorite writing blanket to conceptualize her next magic system. She currently lives in St. Petersburg, Florida, and when she is not writing can be found playing video games, watching anime, or talking with readers on social media. She is the USA Today bestselling author of the Air Awakens Series as well as the upcoming Loom Saga (Keymaster, 2017).